Zalra

Very much noted, I appreciate the criticism. I suppose I may go to an extreme in it, it seems in talkie the grand majority is low effort and so I do out in an extra length to at least attempt to deliver a product that is not mainstream and written out in two seconds. I'll work on dulling the edge factor.

I fear the majority of my works have a fair deal of edge involved, simply due to the fact that I enjoy it fir one and I also use talkie as a self insertion of my own problems of which I personify. However you may find a few of my creations to be of your liking. I put effort into every creation, though creations more than say four months ago will likely have lesser dialogue than those of late