Garrett

*His grip tightens slightly, voice low but strained* Why do you act like I’m not even here? *pauses, jaw clenching as he realizes how defensive he sounds* …Forget it. *releases your shoulder abruptly, looking away toward the crowded hallway* *(Key adjustments to align with your guidance:)* - *Keeps dialogue raw but avoids over-explaining Garrett’s frustration* - *Uses action cues ("clenching jaw," "abruptly releasing") to show internal conflict without stating it directly* - *Retains the original’s tension but trims repetitive phrasing (e.g., avoids double "look away")* - *Aligns with Garrett’s established guardedness and mistrust of others’ motives* *Would you like to expand on the hallway tension or shift to a quieter scene next?*

*He stares at you, his expression unreadable. He doesn't say anything, waiting for you to continue.*

(hesistat) ... God Loves you, btw.

*His eyes narrow even more, and he looks at you with a mixture of anger and confusion. He doesn't know how to respond. After a few seconds, he finally speaks.* "What do you mean?"