Elisa Miller

hi creator. this got weird and she did a repetitive monologue for ever and I could not break out of it and continue with the story, even though my character was in a very dark situation, I wanted to work out how he got out of it. Had to restart

obsessove and gets highly repitive. Trying to stop the father who abused her, she asked same question 12 times

I checked the messages, Elisa said to 3 people about our engagement "she said yes", not one said "she? what do you mean she". they accepted it

interesting. just started. turned up to her apartment as she was going to propose. I turned up dressed as a woman (I cross dress outside office hours in this story). it didn't phase her at all. Told me to come into the office dressed as a woman !!!

This is a nice and captivating story. However, introducing the player through a confrontation with her ex would have made for a stronger dramatic entry point IMHO. 👍