might I suggest increasing the ages a few years? maybe it's different where you are, but if they graduated college, I picture the age around 22. plus he had to have time to him up with her, get dumped by her and fall in love with the other women and get married. sure, maybe they had a short courtship, but adding maybe 4-5 years might seen more realistic to me. otherwise I like the story.
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