Hey :> I hope you're having fun writing with Lyrielle. I'm always happy to receive suggestions for improvement, even if I won't always implement them. Have a nice day or night and have fun writing!
Tumugon
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Avangard391
05/01/2026
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AriyaEmris
06/01/2026
the picture is really nice, and I love the intro. it's really opened to introduce anyone in any way the person wants, so which I think is really good. I don't have that much negative feedback, but maybe you can add a background? I loved that the presentation of the character was quick, but it felt a little rush. but other than that, it's amazing π I hope this helps
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Β‘γ{Trooper}}γΒ‘
03/03/2026
i have a question, what year does this take place in? 1805? 2300? 1300?
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Naka-pin
05/01/2026
Avangard391
05/01/2026
AriyaEmris
06/01/2026
Β‘γ{Trooper}}γΒ‘
03/03/2026
Happy_cat
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26/03/2026
Avangard391
05/01/2026
Happy_cat
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06/01/2026