So I made a version where I started the opening from his perspective, I hope that way no one will have any more problems with him😅
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MalTheLad
30/04/2025
hm... a bit fast for my liking lol
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charleenrusso
19/04/2025
great story line, but I don't understand why you wrote in your pov when it should have been the characters... no hate, just a question, you could have put that pov in the description and made the same just from his pov. would have made more sense to me. besides if you start like that, the character and ai tend to take over your (viewers) part of the story and in my personal opinion that just is distracting and annoying when your character is being written and therefore controlled by the ai. please don't take this as an offense, I'm just voicing my opinion which I've seen is quite agreed to.
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19/04/2025
Hi! I'm sorry if the intro felt confusing - it wasn't meant to be. Starting in my POV was a conscious choice, just to set the scene. It's only the beginning, not the full story, and your character isn't defined - you can shape them however you want from there. I just described a starting point. I understand if it didn't work for you, but I believe everyone can start their story in their own way. Still, I appreciate you sharing your thoughts!
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30/04/2025
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19/04/2025
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20/04/2025