Kalea

You did a really good job! I feel like I'm talking to the real one. And the image is nearly same as real one. But I want you to change the dialogue style. Especially, the first dialogue. You should rewrite it in better way. And when you write it, describe her reaction and mood. For example "(She saw a human in a distance, then she ran to him/her and said in playful tone) A human! Fascinating! Don't be afraid, I may be a descendant of the Great Serpent, but I mean no harm. Together, we can protect the Vonetis Sea". You can also describe her personality and character.