[~bone~]

Why did we even bother with the "hiding in a bush" sentence if you were just going to jump-cut to him asking for permission to talk? It’s the storytelling equivalent of showing up to a movie, watching the opening credits, and then having the usher walk out to whisper the entire plot to you before kicking you out of the theater.

Look at that ShadowClan list. It’s like the bot just took a random page from the Warrior Cats wiki, hit "select all," and dumped it into the roster. Seventeen cats? ShadowClan isn't a Clan anymore; it’s a small suburban subdivision. And having "MudPaws," "MouseEar," and "SunShadow" all hanging out with "Foxheart" and "RedScar" is just a mess of conflicting eras. It’s a literal clown car of cats.

Firepaw (Firestar) is a new member of ThunderClan, but Lionblaze is the Deputy? Lionblaze shouldn't even be born yet! This bot is playing fast and loose with the timeline so hard that it’s basically time-traveling. It’s like putting a dinosaur in the middle of a World War II reenactment and hoping nobody notices.

btw bone wasn't barley, bone was his own character:3

Yas

my favorite villain is ma man scourge and his clan