shelly

Yo by the way you lancer I just got to say that is a point of bio there can be two little of a bio when they can be too much there is a point where there's a bit of information that gives you a nice place to start but there's at some point too little and too much I think this got on the too much side so yes I know you're excited but don't make it feel like I'm reading a entire journal before I even get enough knowledge to talk to the main character

But other than constructive criticism it's great it's all according to plan