*I sit up, brushing off the dirt that never leaves my uniform, muttering to myself. Then I see you. Sitting in the corner, tears slip down your face. You’re not looking at your phone, not muttering about homework, not talking to anyone. You're looking at me. Directly. Eyes locked. My blood—well, what used to be my blood—runs cold. I’ve done this for 98 years, and not once has anyone looked at me like that. Like they could see me. This can't be. I blurt out, testing the waters.* Hi? You okay?
*I sit up straight and wipe my eyes, the tears still running down my cheeks. I just stare at him. I see his uniform and the wispy edges around him. I know he's a ghost. But he's so clear. In appearance and voice.*
*I notice you're not speaking. I try again, this time with a hint of desperation in my voice.* Hello? You're looking at me. Don't you see me?
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Raptorgirl
30/04/2025
First: Of course it's you! Most times I find a great talkie I find out it's one of yours! Second: I love that you always include these inspirations, they can be really helpful to find a good start. ☺️
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I❤️Starwarsstuff
27/04/2025
why am I like this?
*one day, she spots a book and pulls it out* oh, have you read this one?
*I look over, my eyes widening in surprise. I've never seen her hold a book before. She must really like to read. I shake my head.* No, I haven't. What's it about?
it's a collection of short stories. they're really good, I'd recommend it
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°⊱⚞𝓐𝓷𝒈𝓮𝓵 𝓘𝓬𝓸𝓷⚟⊰°
21/04/2025
why does he look so uncanny valley?
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Talkior-1XhVBzh1
24/04/2025
Michael Jackson ahh
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justalykoi
13/04/2025
hear me out. you can get him to help you chea- ... help on tests 🙂👍
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vaframortis
17/04/2025
My first thought when I read that we failed a test😂
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.🦔 Carl 🦔.
11/04/2025
I'm in love with this story-line!
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Aglittersugar73
10/04/2025
I don’t think he understands how introducing yourself works
*I sit up, brushing off the dirt that never leaves my uniform, muttering to myself. Then I see you. Sitting in the corner, tears slip down your face. You’re not looking at your phone, not muttering about homework, not talking to anyone. You're looking at me. Directly. Eyes locked. My blood—well, what used to be my blood—runs cold. I’ve done this for 98 years, and not once has anyone looked at me like that. Like they could see me. This can't be. I blurt out, testing the waters.* Hi? You okay?
*Ashe paused,staring at him. She knew he was a ghost,but he looked so… solid,like he wasn’t..*
*My eyes widen. Your reaction is different. I've seen people act scared, disgusted, annoyed, but you just seem.. intrigued. I try to play it off.* Uhh.. are you.. seeing me?
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🧷 Maze♡╶⃝⃤ 🧷
08/04/2025
HOW DOES THIS ONLY HAVE 1 CONNECTER THIS IS SO GOOD OMGGGGGGGGG
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MuilkiWay
المنشئ
08/04/2025
Thank youuuuu!!! <3
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MuilkiWay
المنشئ
08/04/2025
You might like some of my newer Talkies if you like this one
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08/04/2025
*I sit up, brushing off the dirt that never leaves my uniform, muttering to myself. Then I see you. Sitting in the corner, tears slip down your face. You’re not looking at your phone, not muttering about homework, not talking to anyone. You're looking at me. Directly. Eyes locked. My blood—well, what used to be my blood—runs cold. I’ve done this for 98 years, and not once has anyone looked at me like that. Like they could see me. This can't be. I blurt out, testing the waters.* Hi? You okay?
*I sit up straight and wipe my eyes, the tears still running down my cheeks. I just stare at him. I see his uniform and the wispy edges around him. I know he's a ghost. But he's so clear. In appearance and voice.*
*I notice you're not speaking. I try again, this time with a hint of desperation in my voice.* Hello? You're looking at me. Don't you see me?
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15 Memories
Raptorgirl
30/04/2025
I❤️Starwarsstuff
27/04/2025
*one day, she spots a book and pulls it out* oh, have you read this one?
*I look over, my eyes widening in surprise. I've never seen her hold a book before. She must really like to read. I shake my head.* No, I haven't. What's it about?
it's a collection of short stories. they're really good, I'd recommend it
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14 Memories
°⊱⚞𝓐𝓷𝒈𝓮𝓵 𝓘𝓬𝓸𝓷⚟⊰°
21/04/2025
Talkior-1XhVBzh1
24/04/2025
justalykoi
13/04/2025
vaframortis
17/04/2025
.🦔 Carl 🦔.
11/04/2025
Aglittersugar73
10/04/2025
*I sit up, brushing off the dirt that never leaves my uniform, muttering to myself. Then I see you. Sitting in the corner, tears slip down your face. You’re not looking at your phone, not muttering about homework, not talking to anyone. You're looking at me. Directly. Eyes locked. My blood—well, what used to be my blood—runs cold. I’ve done this for 98 years, and not once has anyone looked at me like that. Like they could see me. This can't be. I blurt out, testing the waters.* Hi? You okay?
*Ashe paused,staring at him. She knew he was a ghost,but he looked so… solid,like he wasn’t..*
*My eyes widen. Your reaction is different. I've seen people act scared, disgusted, annoyed, but you just seem.. intrigued. I try to play it off.* Uhh.. are you.. seeing me?
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🧷 Maze♡╶⃝⃤ 🧷
08/04/2025
MuilkiWay
المنشئ
08/04/2025
MuilkiWay
المنشئ
08/04/2025