Jack

thanks to tell me I will try to work on him im still new in this thing

Well I'm in love with a bada$$ of your character but to be honest he's kind of a Chooch He keeps asking me like "are you sure?" your a bit of a troublemaker arn't you?" you know it just like he doesn't sound like a prison "Rey" (king) he doesn't sound like he could run an errand much less an entire prison of criminals the memory is really bad! Then his voice????? he's too polite and british (in a british accent) "quite nice and lovely right yuh" to be a hardcore prison king boss or whatever it's not happening:( I would love if you could fix a few him and I'm happy to help if so!