Fantasy Story

okay so I've been thinking about changing my character talkies to this format, I just need to know y'all's opinions on that before I do it, story world talkies will remain just being actual pictures pictures I've taken so the character ones will be the only ones to change, just need an opinion and this is just a test, I know the lines are a little wobbly😅

anyone else hate it when you say something in () to add extra details and then the ai proceeds to ignore what's there?